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Where Choice Meets Obligation by ForTheTaking, literature

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Where Choice Meets Obligation

Out of modesty a lie i did commit... though, out of honesty this i must admit. These nights do pierce. it's a bullet to the chest, an empty pillow a next another dream laid to rest. These miles have been very ungracious and not because they keep our bodies at bay but because even if you were but a millimeter within reach my heart would still be worlds away. you've been gone seems nearly a century, for this can you blame me? So please, Love, forgive my behavior. this unkind goodbye i've issued is the only means of recovery i know. forgive, my long pauses my empty glances my distant voice. So please, Love, forgive

This Love Is Your Love by ForTheTaking, literature

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This Love Is Your Love

This sacrificial love that ebbs infinitely from Him cloaks my inadequecies endlessly. The tender touch that soothes can calm the most thunderous quiver that i could ever encounter. the troubles that weigh so heavily on this worrisome vessel are lifted with assurance in His voice. The authority of His stride; powerful without effort, purposeful intent crushing everything vile beneath His feet. I can only hope to obtain the radiance He projects. the heart, soul and mind with which He speaks. if only... i could love with the way He does. selfless not selfish. to give abundantly as He. This love is Your love.

To the Depths by ForTheTaking, literature

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To the Depths

I swear, if this ground swallowed us whole together we'd go willingly, knowing, there's so much more waiting. and i swear, if this ground did relieve, we'd be content with the beautiful abyss we've created. we'd leave behind this lullful life and embrace what's more meaningful. together, we'd walk hand in hand and wherever our feet do so tread, there, would sprout seeds of passion. and from the depths, arise life to this decayed land we once grazed. and i swear, if this ocean were to lure us in, we'd be content with the gallows we'd inhabit. together, we'd swim these deadly seas and conquer all that lies b

The Making Of A Mess by ForTheTaking, literature

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The Making Of A Mess

This is all that's left. the making of a mess. understand, the consequence of evidence and the path it's laid out ahead. cover your bases, clear your corners. this runaway may be your only chance at redemption. is it in you... to pardon all that you fathom... for a possibility that vindication lay in the great unknown? if the answers are barren and desolate understand, you've caused it. you've created this, the making of a mess. is it in you... to bear the weight of pitch black hearts and the sympathy they lack? i fear you'll undermine the strength they attain. i fear you'll crumble as fast as you came. i fear this r

Stationary For Eternity by ForTheTaking, literature

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Stationary For Eternity

Lately love we've become the stillest of mannequins concealing much and leaving all to assumption. Our words have grown as archaic as cursive. but even so, i believe... In your love, im the queen of all thrones, the famest of all knowns. with you darling there is never worry only certainty. In your love, i am the meekest peacekeeper the humblest with tongue in cheek. with you darling there is never unrest only happiness. In your love, i am the strongest of all romans and greeks the richest of the grandest thieves. with you darling, there is only satisfaction in knowing... that forever mannequins we'll be. t

A Certain Guilotine by ForTheTaking, literature

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A Certain Guilotine

The problem here is this, I love. I love more than I'm allowed. I love enough for two, enough for giving and receiving. I love so much because I myself lack love. I enfold myself into these fallacies of perfection, that because i love, i am too be loved. because i continue to believe that goodness breeds goodness. but that isnt so. Indeed, it's quite backwards. I love the most unlovable... the most challenging.... the most undeserving. and the most pitiful is this; i loved perpetually regardless of overuse. so what is this vacant heart to do? but continue to love. without such a notable heart what is left? but a

Dearest Comrade, by ForTheTaking, literature

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Dearest Comrade,

Comrade, forgive my manners, for it's been years since we've been heart to heart. Rather than validity, we've chosen fallacy. Remember the days of youthful spite, recall the ways you dared challenge me with all your might. Revive the fervor in your heart; your passion so adamant to dangle defeat within my grasp and dazzle darkness within sight. Comrade, forgive my manners. For in these sentences I've been quite frank. Rather than subtlety, I've chosen agility. Now Comrade, It's of you to conclude; will you see this as a bit of courtesy or will this be a poor design of informality? Will you accept inaccuracy

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Where Choice Meets Obligation by ForTheTaking, literature

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Where Choice Meets Obligation

This Love Is Your Love by ForTheTaking, literature

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This Love Is Your Love

To the Depths by ForTheTaking, literature

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To the Depths

The Making Of A Mess by ForTheTaking, literature

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The Making Of A Mess

Stationary For Eternity by ForTheTaking, literature

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Stationary For Eternity

A Certain Guilotine by ForTheTaking, literature

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A Certain Guilotine

Dearest Comrade, by ForTheTaking, literature

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Dearest Comrade,

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Homesick In June by moretolifethanthis, literature

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Homesick In June

I put my charm inside this box. This road trip will be a long one, and the tape is tangled up leaving us with the scene of quiteness. Your eyes captivate my heart, hypnotizing my mind. I can just go to sleep watching your eyes. The world is my biggest stage, and I guarantee to put a good show no matter what the weather is going to be. I know that if I dont say that you are the one for me i would be commiting a sin for lying. Can you see that i am celebrating christmas in June? I put up all the lights so that the scene will represent our first kiss. You always make my eyes turn no matter what you wear because you are so be

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enter in

hello did you hurt yourself again? are you sorry for the pain you have created? ill be sorry for this absent minded kiss you share with another ill be sorry for you when can we remember when does this become a memory when does this moment slip into eternity fall into the past im trying to forget forgetting how im falling on the floor... youre just standing there staring this room is spinning but you stay perfectly still when can i remember that i forgot my love for you when? is it now? are you for real? what i feel is that i cant i never will this is too strong i can forgive and give you my other cheek prepare my

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As Far As Eyes Can See by ForTheTaking, literature

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As Far As Eyes Can See

If i could, i'd rip my eyes out of their sockets and sew them into yours; i'd make you look at what's in their path, what's at hand. if i could, i'd cut open my chest and hand you my heart at its weakest. i'd show you the void that's missing at its core. i'd give it to you for keeps, do with it as you will. if i could, i'd hypnotize you in the deepest trance. i'd tell you everything i've been cringing to say. i'd tell you what's been keeping me from sleep. i'd say it with clarity and validity, and then maybe you would see... if i could, i'd give you EVERYTHING as far as eyes can see. i'd give you Saturn and

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Greece
Deviant for 19 years
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Current Residence: a van down by the river
Favourite photographer: a.tori
Operating System: my organs
Shell of choice: TURTLE

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the LITTLE bird

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wuthering heights

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ForTheTaking

Aug 14, 2006

CO and CA

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soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. last night was pretty much amaziiiing! went to the glass house to see facing new york and coheed and cambria. twas a much needed lifter of sorts. like all other bands i've seen.. they were better live. and claudio.. that stud... he played guitar with a violin bow... it was great... ahhhhh... orgasmic. i need another good show.. suggestions??  :stereo:

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ForTheTaking

Aug 14, 2006

You can't polish a turd

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Crow, you're so not down....    :lonely:

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ForTheTaking

Oct 21, 2005

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walking a tight rope,          unsure of success,               abandoning the platform,                         will the end welcome me,                                        will i turn and run back,                                                                  or plummet?                                                                                                       losing both...

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CoCoZeZe

Nov 6, 2006

zed... my heart is hurting for you, and not because i'm eating fatty foods and stuff... come back to me!!

i didn't want to park there!!!

when are we going to do stuff again?????

you
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ForTheTaking

Aug 4, 2006

WUCKA WUCKA WUCKA!!!!!!!!! JUST PARK THERE!!! ITS RIGHT IN FRONNNNNT! soorry man. i was working that day. then i totally passed out. so here i am !

stop pooping

it's august zed. we haven't seen each other in 33 years. when will we ever be able to sit and laugh like we used to? it's been too long..

valifornialove

Jun 2, 2005

have i told you lately ..that i love you?- i like that song